A Good Story

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Well, one day I was scrambling around my drawer trying to find my notebook when I found one of my stories from school. Then I had an AWESOME IDEA! I was going to copy the story, and turn it into Club-Penguin-Themed! Well, Here it is:

THE FOOL OF THE WORLD AND THE INVADING PENGUIN-ALIENS

Once long ago in the 19th century, there was a penguin who believed there was a planet in a whole different universe that was invaded by penguin-aliens. He lived in the South Pole. The name of the penguin was Crazieshado. But he was normally called the Fool of the World. He was called that because he believed everything people said, even if it were foolish or a joke, and he also accepted people’s advice, only giving little or no thought! He heard this “Invading Penguin-Aliens” joke from a story.

Crazieshado was 56 years old, and he was only good at one thing, and that was making rockets! He was so eager to find some invading penguin-aliens that he made a rocket for himself.

Then he bought a space suit and an air tank. After that, he packed some supplies. He decided to go into space! Imagine, the first penguin in space! He packed lots of food, snacks, a map of space, water, a first aid kit, some fold-able, durable, easy-to travel with furniture, and an air tank. Then he got ready to blast off into space, “This is gonna be fun!” he thought. But little did he know that he was up for the adventure of his life that he would never forget!

The Fool of the World soon realized that he did not know the controls!! So after he acknowledging that, he began to madly press all the buttons on the rocket. His rocket swayed back and forth and upside down and almost hit an asteroid!

“That was WAY to close!” Crazieshado said.

After a little while, he saw a small object in the clearing, “It’s a planet!!” yelled The Fool of the World.

According to his map of space, this planet was almost unknown, and was only seen by the most powerful telescope, but has never been further discovered at all, and is called planet Zenith. He got so excited that he nearly jumped out of his seat. With that, Crazieshado landed on the planet.

As soon as he landed, he was amazed. That was because he saw a city of aliens!! He also discovered that there were good guys and bad guys, in fact, almost everything worked like it wold in the North and South Pole except instead of penguins and puffles, there were penguin-aliens and puffle-aliens, and instead of cars, there were UFOs! Crazieshado was so amazed that he yelled, “Oh, my gosh! This is SOOO cool!”

Then, all the penguin-aliens turned around and stared at him. Crazieshado gulped, “Uh-Oh!”, Crazieshado had realized his mistake.

Then the strongest-looking penguin-alien that seemed like the leader yelled some penguin-alien language, and immediately after he was finished talking, penguin-aliens of all different colors and sizes came charging directly at Freeze602.

There were green penguin-aliens, red ones, blue, yellow, indigo, pink, purple, gold, and the leader kept changing colors! “This was not as I thought it would be!”, said Freeze602, terrified.

He hurried to his rocket, but when he was a few metres away from the planet, he saw a few UFOs with mad penguin-aliens in them!

The UFOs shot snowball-lasers, and while the Fool of the World was dodging, he found a red button that said in bold, PUSH IN CASE OF EMERGENCY!! Now, this was definitely an emergency! So Crazieshado pressed it, and as soon as he did, hidden holes around the rocket a few sharp explosive-puffle dummies blasted the penguin-aliens out of their now flaming UFOs!

By the time they brushed off the metal pieces on them, Crazieshado had already escaped! The penguin-aliens knew it was no use trying to chase him, so they gave up.

When Crazieshado got back to his home in South Pole, everyone knew about the big news. Even the North Pole did! They even put him on the Penguin Times Newspaper! The headlines read: Strange New Planet Discovered by Crazieshado! He became famous. Nobody ever called him the Fool of the World or even a Fool ever again!

The End!

Well! That’s the story! If you have any good ideas for me to change some of the words into penguin-theme, your more than welcome to give me suggestions below! I hoped you liked it! I created it myself!

Waddle On!

-from Freeze602 (or the Fool of the World!)

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45 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Ruler Of Wax  |  March 18, 2007 at 7:23 am

    wuho the first coment YES YES YES!! :p

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  • 2. Mark  |  March 21, 2007 at 10:51 pm

    the second comment yesyesyes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • 3. freeze602  |  March 21, 2007 at 11:37 pm

    Thats pointless you guys! Stop doing that stuff! please!

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  • 4. freeze602  |  April 29, 2007 at 5:05 pm

    If anyone would be kind enough to make pics of parts of the story than that would be just GREAT!

    Reply
  • 5. Snow949  |  May 1, 2007 at 12:14 am

    lol snowball-lasers GOOD IDEA! and its not even random! like the stuff i mostly i talk about. i go out of the blue and talk about stuff that had nothing to do with the convertsation. what about the weather today? i wonder why the sky is blue. maybe i should write a book. also i….. UGH I’VE DONE IT AGAIN

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  • 6. roadcrosser  |  May 5, 2007 at 8:24 am

    The sharp darts shoud be puffle missiles

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  • 7. Lollipop  |  May 5, 2007 at 4:30 pm

    Teeeheee
    silly puffles

    EDITORS COMMENT

    They are NOT silly you EGGHEAD!

    The REAL Editors Comment

    What the heck thats the most useless and spam-ish comment ever!

    Reply
  • 8. fish rule  |  May 8, 2007 at 7:08 pm

    cool ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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  • 9. Chilly67  |  May 24, 2007 at 7:48 pm

    that was cool well done

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  • 10. crazy4beens  |  June 10, 2007 at 5:23 pm

    Please change the “wold to “would”

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  • 11. bella03  |  June 12, 2007 at 4:38 pm

    great story! check out chilly731’s site @:

    http://chilly731clubpenguin.wordpress.com

    *bella*

    Reply
  • 12. icyice  |  June 13, 2007 at 3:59 am

    :mrgreen: ๐Ÿ˜ฅ ๐Ÿ˜ก โžก :mrcool: ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

    Reply
  • 13. brady123  |  June 21, 2007 at 11:43 pm

    AWESOME STORY (no offence but you spelled would wrong)I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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  • 14. brady123  |  June 21, 2007 at 11:47 pm

    ๐Ÿ˜Ž great story i loved it so much! :cheer: ๐Ÿ™‚

    Reply
  • 15. zachster LT8  |  June 24, 2007 at 2:57 am

    that is soooo dang awsome god i loved it you should be an atherer

    Reply
  • 16. master yodea (same author as money box)  |  June 27, 2007 at 7:43 pm

    plz listen

    club penguin trainer 4 is out WOW

    Reply
  • 17. master yodea (same author as money box)  |  June 27, 2007 at 7:44 pm

    i think a cool story is up ahead

    Reply
  • 18. Caronan  |  June 30, 2007 at 1:01 pm

    I like the story man can u make another story(Like I mean really good) so see ya in CP at Big Foot

    Reply
  • 19. wheelwrights  |  July 1, 2007 at 8:49 pm

    nice dude check out my site
    http://wheelwrights.wordpress.com

    ๐Ÿ˜€

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  • 20. cphacker10  |  July 5, 2007 at 2:45 am

    hmmmm…..nice….I like it!!!Maybe you could turn it into a REAL book.

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  • 21. master yodea (same author as money box)  |  July 9, 2007 at 12:24 pm

    freeze 602 is not fool of the world i am

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  • 22. Chukklez390  |  July 13, 2007 at 2:41 pm

    By the way you spelt meters wrong you dumb***

    EDITORS COMMENT

    I live in Canada and alot of people in Canada follow the United Kingdoms spelling methods (donuts=doughtnuts program=programme meters=metres center=centre, etc)! Guess who’s the dumb*** now, eh?

    Reply
  • 23. Blubber K  |  July 22, 2007 at 8:33 pm

    Cool story!!! I love drawing. I could do pictures! On the computer or hand drawn? E-mail me at Blubber.K@gmail.com if you want to ask me something.

    P.S. On my site there is a picture that I drew on the computer.

    Reply
  • 24. Blazy01296  |  July 24, 2007 at 9:49 pm

    What colours were the alian puffles?

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  • 25. the homeless impersonator  |  July 26, 2007 at 9:51 am

    i’m the most stupid kid in the world and i’m homeless. i’m an idiot. i can’t type properly.

    EDITORS COMMENT

    This is what you get for impersonating ANYONE on this site.

    Reply
  • 26. Chilly67  |  July 27, 2007 at 4:47 pm

    i wanna tell my horror story. its not that scary, but i stilll think its pretty good:

    once there’s a girl called Katie and she was reading in her school’s library and she turns the page of her book and written there in huge, red letters was

    DONT LOOK BEHIND YOU…

    she thinks that someone was vandalising the book so she shows it to the librarian and the librarian went pale and whispered to herself “oh my god, its happening again.”

    Katie asked her what was happening again and she said “nothing, just go home now and dont talk to anyone on the way.”

    when she got home she opened her wardrobe to get changed and written in huge, red letters at the back of the wardrobe was

    ITS HAPPENING AGAIN KATIE ONLY THIS TIME ITS HAPPENING TO YOU

    she got really freaked out and she ran downstairs to her mum. she began to tell her mum when her mum said “be quiet im watching the news”

    when katie looked at the bar scrolling across the screen it said over and over again in huge, red letters

    DONT LOOK BACK DONT LOOK BACK DONT LOOK BACK DONT LOOK BACK DONT LOOK BACK DONT LOOK BACK DONT LOOK BACK

    and then…

    okay i havent finished it yet lol i will tho!!!!

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  • 27. Blubber K  |  July 31, 2007 at 7:34 pm

    Cool story!!! I love drawing! I could do pictures! On the computer or hand drawn? E-mail me at Blubber.K@gmail.com if you want to ask me something. I really wanna draw the pics!!!

    EDITORS COMMENT

    Yes, please do the pictures. I don’t care if you do it hand and scan it or on the computer. Whichever one works better for you.

    Reply
  • 28. Blubber K  |  August 5, 2007 at 2:47 pm

    Do you still need someone to draw pictures?

    EDITORS COMMENT

    Yes

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  • 29. Aiyana  |  August 7, 2007 at 3:06 pm

    Hi,

    Your story is wonderful. Try to adds ome effects to the story like putting in pictures or making it comical. That would be more fun.

    Reply
  • 30. zakman209  |  August 21, 2007 at 2:43 pm

    your story was fun to read i like it

    Reply
  • 31. Blazy01296  |  August 22, 2007 at 12:41 am

    sweet

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  • 32. Blazy01296  |  August 22, 2007 at 12:42 am

    ๐Ÿ˜‰

    ๐Ÿ™‚

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  • 33. Blazy01296  |  August 22, 2007 at 12:42 am

    :0

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  • 34. Blazy01296  |  August 22, 2007 at 12:43 am

    ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

    Reply
  • 35. hollywood435(penguin name)  |  August 24, 2007 at 8:48 pm

    that story was awsome! i read it 15 times.

    Reply
  • 36. Makenna  |  August 27, 2007 at 2:01 pm

    Chilly PLEASE finish the story soon i love scary stories!

    Reply
  • 37. fetui9  |  September 6, 2007 at 8:57 pm

    ๐Ÿ™‚

    Reply
  • 38. triss190  |  September 16, 2007 at 9:24 am

    visit http://www.triss190.wordpress.com and paint ur own penguin!!

    Reply
  • 39. Molly  |  September 17, 2007 at 8:47 am

    I read it in real life 95 times
    Ive a lead collection at school in my sharpnerer i got 123 at the moment IT TRUES

    I LOVE THE STORY ONE OF THE BEST I’VE READ!!!!!!!! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  • 40. Bob  |  October 30, 2007 at 9:55 pm

    not really

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  • 41. gothgirl29  |  November 11, 2007 at 11:29 pm

    Cool
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    cool
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    cool
    cool

    Reply
  • 42. Jeffrey7724  |  December 8, 2007 at 2:47 am

    great story! the only i dont get is how it changes from crazieshado to freeze602….

    Reply
  • 43. Crystalia  |  December 16, 2007 at 12:43 pm

    Hahaha thats really funny the first and second comment!!!!!! Well freeze I kinda like your story but in my point of view its a little too….. LONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • 44. kdkl  |  December 4, 2008 at 2:49 am

    lol sry again for hacking ure acc. lol

    Reply
  • 45. kdkl  |  December 4, 2008 at 2:50 am

    dude, email me at jetscientist@yahoo.ca dude, kenrick, put me on the wall of fame plz XD

    Reply

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